My poems

[Ice Queen]

I wrote this poem a long, long time ago for my grandmother.

You mean a lot to me

You mean so much to me
you give me hope.
Without you my world is gone,
without you my soul is dead.

It's OK if nobody is home
but without you I feel so lifeless.
I miss you immensely
you are wonderful to me.

I learn slowly how to live without you
sometimes I just can't figure out myself.
Sometimes it is very hard and sometimes it is just hard
and sometimes I remind myself that you live in my heart.

B. Najdovska CIP

[cerina]

I love that last one. It is so beautiful.

[Ice Queen]

Thank you cerina!

[mid_nite_poet]

They are all really good poems IQ... I'm glad that you finally decided to share them with us..

[Ice Queen]

Thank you MNP!

[ScornedVixen]

Me too, like MNP am really glad you decided to share your creativeness. My heart sank as I read "I will forget you" and "you mean a lot to me" is a phase I'm going through right now.

Such beautiful prose, such beautiful flow. roll on to more.

Vix

[Ice Queen]

Thank you so much Vix!

[Ice Queen]

I wrote this 6 months ago for my first boyfriend (now ex), my biggest lost love:

The last poem

This is the last poem for you
I'm doing this for myself!
Too late I have found out
that I do not love you anymore
and that I am waisting my time.

Give yourself to her completely!
Have a pink colour in your heart.
Have your own wings
let love make you strong.

I am finally free!

B. Najdovska

[cerina]

That is absolutely beautiful, IQ. It sounds as if you set yourself free with that poem, as well as setting him free.

[Ice Queen]

Thanks so much cerina!

[Silkee]

wow IQ you write very good free flow..I am more of a rhyming writer, I have difficulty writing free flow and making it sound good, I can clearly see you have quite a talent at free flowing..Nice Poems!!!

[Ice Queen]

Thank you Silkee!

[Sting]

I love your poems IQ. I know of some of the struggles you have with love and its good to write them down on paper.

[ScornedVixen]

The Last Poem made my eyes well up, you're good with words and how to express. Awwww, to you and some more

Vix

[Ice Queen]

Thank you Sir Sting, thank you Vix!

[Ice Queen]

The last dance

The last step
the last gaze
the last dance
you are so distant.

Hand in hand, my head on your shoulder
oh, if we could only see ourselves.

With pain in our hearts
and silence between us
we dance as we used to
but this time we are through.

B. Najdovska

[ScornedVixen]

Such beautiful writing, I like very much how you manage to get all said in just few words. the depth of emotions etc.

Aww

[~PC~]

Lovely! Someday I hope to be able to write again someday. Perhaps if I stick with talented company...

[cerina]

That is beautiful, IQ. You have a wonderful free-flow style.

[mid_nite_poet]

That is a beautiful poem IQ..I wish my words would flow as graceful as yours.

[Ice Queen]

Thanks everyone!


And MNP, your poems are perfect!

[Ice Queen]

Perishing

It was a night like any other
completely ordinary, plain
filled with distant gray starlight
coolness and harvest moon,
quiet, empty, lonely...

That night in the waste-land
on the dry branch of a thunder stricken tree
two birds were standing together-one next to the other
watching the waste land in front of them
feeling the coolness of the night
and smelling the reek of the thunder stricken tree.

Their hearts were playing the melody of life.
Even on that burned branch
they were singing
flying around,
floating,
slipping,
rescuing each other,
surviving and enjoying themselves.
They never let any minute perish in nothingness.

In that moment-a magic was born
and before my eyes a mystery was formed
I was the one that saw it!
I was the one that felt it!
-Another minute had perished in front of my eyes.

[cerina]

Wow! That is beautiful, IQ.

[mid_nite_poet]

It's nice to see you back sharing your poetry with us.. Wonderful poem IQ