Old song.

The pen is mighty

Old song.

Postby fat_bastard » 17 Dec 06, 9:21 am

Wrote this one a while ago but evidently didnt post it here.
Thought I had.
Same theme as always I'm afriad:

Staring at the starlit skies, seeing visions of your eyes,
Wonder if you’re still alive, lying with some other guy,
I lie awake again, pale white moon my only friend,
Still revolving never strays, always there at end of days.

A guy can’t help but dream,
But dreaming aint reality,
I just wake up and scream,
Your name,
Felt you led next to me.

I guess you didn’t need me afterall,
Illusions don’t break a fall.

It feels so long ago, your pretty face as white as snow,
Your warm breath on my face, making my heart change its pace,
One moment lost in time, your tounge brushing up with mine,
Our bodies move as one, heavy breathing, fingers numb.

A guy can’t help but dream,
But dreaming aint reality,
I just wake up and scream,
Your name,
Felt you led next to me.

I guess you didn’t need me afterall,
Illusions don’t break a fall.

But you wernt satisfied, walked away and closed your eyes,
Cold tears ran down your cheek, pulled away, my grip too weak.
Our crossed paths grow apart, each day another broken heart,
Guess things are never how they seem, love is just a dream.

A guy can’t help but dream,
But dreaming aint reality,
I just wake up and scream,
Your name,
Felt you led next to me.

I guess you didn’t need me afterall,
Illusions don’t break a fall.
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Postby Wicked » 19 Dec 06, 7:15 pm

Wow, that's beautiful, FB.
Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead
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Postby Sting » 19 Dec 06, 9:33 pm

Yep!  It's good indeed.   :thumb:
Searching for that sweet little honey pot? Go to http://www.bitoffun.com
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Postby Ice Queen » 20 Dec 06, 5:19 am

:clap: :clap: :clap:
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Postby mid_nite_poet » 20 Dec 06, 5:32 am

FB, that is amazing...Your good..   :thumb: :clap: :clap:
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Postby fat_bastard » 20 Dec 06, 10:28 am

Thanks everyone.   :D
I try to put a lot of heart into my songs.
They're always meant for someone special to hear, unfortunately they rarely do.
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Postby cerina » 20 Dec 06, 3:03 pm

That's because you keep forgetting to send them to me   :roll:
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Postby Maxie » 20 Dec 06, 8:00 pm

Ohhhhhh that is so beautiful Image

Thank you darling Image
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Postby Quercus » 20 Dec 06, 10:32 pm

That's great FB!  I wish I could hear it sung.  Do you play an instrument too?
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Postby fat_bastard » 21 Dec 06, 7:56 am

I play mary had a little lamb on the piano. :dance:
My voice is shit and my instrumental talent is shit unfortunately but if you want I can make a bad recording with no backup music.
If you like cringing.   :lol:
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